The maps below show the village of Stockford in 1930 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stockford in 1930 and 2010. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The
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maps show
the
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Stockford
village
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and the changes it has gone through, between the time period of 1930 to 2010. Looking at the charts, the most striking feature noticeable is the construction of a large number of houses in the areas where the farmlands once existed. In the year 1930,
majority
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of the land of the village was covered by farmlands. There were shops beside the Post Office, opposite
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the Primary
School
. In the South direction, a large house with various gardens used to stand near the
school
along with
the
River
Stoke in the South-West direction. A farming ground used to be present to the right of the
river
.
While
viewing the map of 2010, it can be seen that the shops that once stood beside the Post Office were demolished and replaced by a number of homes. The
school
was rebuilt and extended and the large house was converted into a Retirement home. The land to the east of
River
Stoke was covered by houses
along with
the area beside the primary
school
. The
River
stoke and a bridge that stood in the north of the village in the year 1930, were standing unchanged even after 80 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 4 times.

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  • aerial perspective
  • land use
  • agricultural land
  • rural
  • urban development
  • housing estate
  • residential area
  • commercial area
  • business park
  • shopping center
  • infrastructure
  • construct
  • roundabout
  • disappearance
  • green spaces
  • complexity
  • transformation
  • expansion
  • modernization
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