Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the enviornment . What damage does plastic do to the enviornment ? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

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past decades the
use
of
plastic
bags,
plastic
bottles
and
plastic
food packaging has
been
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increased tremendously .
People
now a days
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nowadays
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need to understand the importance of
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the enviornment
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enviornment
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environment
and what damage we are doing to
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the enviornment
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enviornment
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environment
by using
plastic
items. One of the
reason
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reasons
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for global warming is
use
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the use
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of
plastic
whereever
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wherever
, one travels
now a days
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nowadays
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to buy food or
water
it is always stored in
plastic
bottles
or bags . One of the major damage
plastic
is doing to the
enviornment
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environment
is
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people
throwing
plastic
waste in canals and rivers ,
instead
of
disposing
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it in
garbage
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the garbage
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. The
plastic
waste thrown in
river
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the river
a river
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is polluting the
water
and
this
is affecting the marine life . Many fishes and other marine
spieces
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species
are now dying because of the polluted
water
, not only marine life but
also
humans are affected by
pollted
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polluted
water
as
people
living near the
coastle
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coastal
coastline
areas are using river
water
for their domestic purpose. Which leads to illness and death . It is very much important now to stop using
platic
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plastic
products and move towards sustainability . There are solutions to move towards sustainable living . The
use
of glass
bottles
should be done
instead
of
plastic
or else
people
should carry their own
bottles
. Food packaging can be done in paper bags or cloth
bag
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bags
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. The waste of
plastic
should be recycled . Government should charge
penalty
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penalties
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to the
people
who are using
plastic
products ,
this
is how we can take
step
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towards sustainability and
decrese
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decrease
the
use
of
plastic
products .
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