Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say Agree to this arrangement say what time is suitable for you Describe what you are planning to do

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Dear Alice, I hope my letter finds you well. I am writing to inform you that you can send your children to my place

this

weekend, I don't have any other plans so not to worry. I'll take care of them very well and I hope they will enjoy Aaira's company. I would like to know a few things about them so that I can adjust those things and give them a homely feeling

such

as their eating schedule and at what time they go to bed and wake up in the morning.These things will help me in making them feel good and special.

Moreover

, I am planning to take them to the Funcity which is in Panchkula and I know that they will definitely

enjoy

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, it's a fun place for families and kids. I am so excited to meet them in person and let me know when you'll drop them at my place, and if you need any kind of help you can let me know. Looking forward to seeing you all. Yours Sincerely, Shikha

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

176 words

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