Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent decades,
animals
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utilized for
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in order to discover new medicines and test the safety of other goods. Some individuals believe that these
experiments
should be prohibited because it is unethical and can cause harm to creatures,
whereas
others think it can be beneficial for
humans
. In my opinion,
the
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trials
in
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animals
should
do
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not
banned
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because
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can help to improve
people
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health
as well as
animals
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. On the one hand, some
people
believe the
experiments
in
animals
it immoral and should stop. They believe
animals
are feel
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as
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like
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humans
, they can struggle with pain
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the
experiments
.
Furthermore
, thanks to
advancemnts
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advances
in technology , scientists can do their medical
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using simulations program or
humans
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cells, which
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indicate do not need to use
animals
for
trials
.
On the other hand
, I believe
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experiments
in
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animals
are necessary to enhance the
overall
health
of
humans
and
animals
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the humans
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humans
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level,
trials
a
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new drugs in
animals
can help
the
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scientists to
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the medications are safe before
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in
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people
.
For example
, the majority of our medicines
are tests
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in rats in order to make sure there are no serious side effects of these medicines, which
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will
boosts
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overall
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health
of
people
. At
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the animals
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animals
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level,
the
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some
of
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animals
are extinct result of global warming and climate change,
the
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scientists these days work in order to find
a
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new drugs to help
animals
to
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deal with
rising
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of
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temperature of
earth
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,
which
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this
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trials
will contribute to
protect
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animals
from risk extinction. In conclusion,
in
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my perspective
experiments
in
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animals
can
bring
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positive impacts
of
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humans
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human
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and
animals
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animal
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health
and should not banned.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ethics
  • Morality
  • Vivisection
  • In vivo testing
  • Cruelty-free
  • Animal welfare
  • Biomedical research
  • Toxicology
  • Sentience
  • Compassionate
  • Humane
  • Speciesism
  • In vitro
  • Alternative methods
  • Pharmacology
  • Clinical trials
  • Bioethics
  • Animal rights
  • Pain threshold
  • Efficacy
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