Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent decades,
animals
are
utilized for Wrong verb form
have been
experiment
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experimental
purpose
in order to discover new medicines and test the safety of other goods. Some individuals believe that these Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
experiments
should be prohibited because it is unethical and can cause harm to creatures, whereas
others think it can be beneficial for humans
. In my opinion, the
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apply
trials
in
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on
animals
should do
not Verb problem
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banned
because Add a missing verb
be banned
it
can help to improve Correct pronoun usage
they
people
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people's
health
as well as
animals
.
On the one hand, some Change noun form
animals'
animal's
people
believe the experiments
in animals
it immoral and should stop. They believe animals
are feel
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feel
as
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like
humans
, they can struggle with pain while
the Change preposition
during
experiments
. Furthermore
, thanks to advancemnts
in technology , scientists can do their medical Correct your spelling
advances
researches
using simulations program or Fix the agreement mistake
research
humans
cells, which Change the noun form
human
this
indicate do not need to use Correct pronoun usage
apply
animals
for trials
.
On the other hand
, I believe the
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that
experiments
in
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on
animals
are necessary to enhance the overall
health
of humans
and animals
. At Correct article usage
the humans
humans
level, Change the noun form
human
trials
a
new drugs in Correct your spelling
of
animals
can help the
scientists to Correct article usage
apply
ensuring
the medications are safe before Change the verb form
ensure
apply
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they are applied
in
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to
people
. For example
, the majority of our medicines are tests
in rats in order to make sure there are no serious side effects of these medicines, which Change the verb form
are tested
this
will Correct pronoun usage
apply
boosts
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boost
overall
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the overall
health
of people
. At Correct article usage
the animals
animals
level, Change the noun form
animal
the
some Correct article usage
apply
of
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apply
animals
are extinct result of global warming and climate change, the
scientists these days work in order to find Correct article usage
apply
a
new drugs to help Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
animals
to
deal with Verb problem
apply
rising
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the rising
of
temperature of Change preposition
apply
earth
, Add an article
the earth
which
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and
this
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these
trials
will contribute to protect
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protecting
animals
from risk extinction.
In conclusion, in
my perspective Change preposition
from
experiments
in
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on
animals
can bring
positive impacts Verb problem
have
of
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on
humans
and Fix the agreement mistake
human
animals
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animal
health
and should not banned.Submitted by faiz3177 on
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