You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You shou

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Dear John, How r you? I am doing well here and I hope your family is good. I have good news for you. I bought a new
house
which is bigger and better than my previous
house
. I have shifted recently. The
house
has a swimming pool inside, as u know I like swimming and I am a champion in it that's why I wanted a
house
like
this
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,
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there is a pool table inside my
house
and an inbuilt speaker attached to it. Plus I have a mini bar inside my
house
with a lot of beverages and alcoholic drinks and I have updated my office with a new mac book pro and a new cupboard. The neighbours are really nice and cooperative with me. We sit in the garden and have some chit-chat. I am looking to see you soon. I want you to see the
house
and let's spend some cool time together in the
house
with lots of new stuff. I am running out of space. See you soon Yours faithfully, Steve
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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