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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

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It is true that there are many parents who naturally succumb to their
children
’s
demand
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 as soon as they ask for them.
This
 essay will first discuss whether it is an effective method to bring up
children
 and it will
then
 give the possible consequences when those
children
 are getting older.
To begin
 with, there are an array of reasons why many people think it is not a good way to educate
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children
.
Firstly
, over-indulgence probably makes
children
 feel to be
self-centered
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 so they would pester their parents for stuff they want or do whatever they like
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 a regular basis. If they did not achieve their goal, they would get really angry with their mums and dads, even
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 would not obey their parents later.
Secondly
,
children
 might be getting into a bad habit of jealousy. Indeed, they would be under peer pressure at school to have the best of everything and not have a sense of satisfaction if their classmates have something better than they do. For
aforementioned
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 reasons, I believe that
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instant gratification could have adverse consequences in the future as
children
 grow up. Many adults may find it difficult to search for good friends or colleagues just because of their characteristics, and some of them cannot keep their long-lasting friendships. A second problem they would possibly face is that many people do not grasp the real value of money or learn how to manage it effectively in their childhood.
Therefore
, they could be in bad financial condition in
their
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 future. In conclusion, it seems to me that raising
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children
 in
this
 way is more negative than positive in the present
as well as
 in the future when these
children
 grow up.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • indulgent
  • entitlement
  • discipline
  • responsibility
  • nurturing
  • self-reliance
  • adversity
  • autonomy
  • validation
  • dependence
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