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The graph shows the hours spent in different study methods during a two year course

The graph shows the hours spent in different study methods during a two year course
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The line graph gives information about the number of
hours
 spent in several
study
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year
 course.
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 and become
more
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a more
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way
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study
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 period,
while
 the
lectuers
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lecturers
lectures
 and
classes
 showed
decline
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 , the
library
 method showed fluctuations. Looking
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 the chart in more detail, in
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year
 and semester students
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spent
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the highest
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 number of
hours
 in lectures and
classes
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almost 7
hours
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followed
 by
library
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the library
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 was
approxmiately
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approximately
 4
hours
,
whereas
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the internet
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internet
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Internet
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 was the lowest
interested
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way
 for students to
study
 only they spend about 3
hours
. In the first
year
 and
second
semester
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 the lectures and
classes
 reach
the
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 peak of
hours
 was almost 8
hourse
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hours
 compared to other periods,
while
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period
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 the
library
 reach
lowest
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its lowest
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hours
 about 3.5
hours
 . In the
second
year
 and
semester
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 the
library
 reach
zeinth
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zenith
hours
 at 8
hours
 ,
while
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second
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way
 by 7
hours
 and
library
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the library
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 was lowest
about
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 6
hours
.
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given
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period
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Internet
 has become the most popular
way
 to
study
 and the pupils spent almost 11
hours
 and the
second
 was
library
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the library
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approxmiately
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approximately
 6
hours
,
while
 the lectures and
classes
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interested
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way
 to
study
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was
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 spent about only 5
hours
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, study, year, way, classes, library, second with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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