The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Improving people’s lives should be the main purpose of
science
. This
essay agrees for two reasons medicines for certain illnesses
do not have discover
yet and improving people’s lives means increasing Change the form of the verb
discovered
productivity
.
To begin
with, the first reason why the main priority of science
should be to improve life expectancy is that some illnesses
do not found yet a cure. This
is important for science
to make experiments and trials to discover the medicine for those illnesses
. Many people around the world are suffered because of illnesses
for which they just depend on general treatment. For example
, HIV and AIDS are sexually transmitted diseases that do not found yet the appropriate treatment and medicine to cure them, science
just still know how to prevent the transmission of those diseases. Thus
, this
pivotal role of science
is to find the medicine where
people with HIV or AIDS will be passed on to their children.
Correct word choice
that
In addition
, by improving life expectancy science
will have a big role in increasing people’s productivity
. It is because the
Correct article usage
apply
productivity
may decline when people are sick due to
taking days off work. For instance
, medical trials tried to find out ways to improve productivity
such
as taking regular exercise and eating healthy food, those are from the science
.
To sum up
, I strongly agree the primary goal of science
should be to improve individuals’ lives. The two fundamental reasons are that the treatment should be found to treat illness and productively will increase.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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