You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

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Dear Sir, I am Shikha, a student of Electronics and Communication Engineering from Batch 2008. I am writing

this

letter to request you to issue me a new Identification

card

as soon as possible. I lost my

card

last

week, and have already searched for it in almost every place including the hostel room, canteen etcetera but sadly, didn't find it anywhere. I am getting a lot more problems

due to

this

such

as entering the library needing an ID

card

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and Issuing any college material that needs it too.

Moreover

, we got free bus service on that ID

card

which is not there anymore. So, I request you to please issue me a new ID

card

this

week. I am ready to pay the penalty too.

Also

, as you'll be printing it again I would request you to update my picture on it with the current picture, it is

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old picture and I don't like that much. Looking forward to your positive reply. Yours Sincerely, Shikha

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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Topic Vocabulary:

Identification card
Student ID
Lost
Misplaced
Access
Campus facilities
Library access
Gym membership
Discounts
Pass verification
Student status
Urgent
Issuance
Replacement
Procedure
Fee
Documentation
Assistance
Resolution
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