The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.

The bar chart illustrates the

number

of downloading three program packages; ActiveX, Java and Net each

week

during

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5 weeks.

Overall

, it can be seen that ActiveX and Net program packages were the most and less popular applications among users respectively.

Also

, the amount of downloading these three programs had almost

upward

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trend in the whole

period

. ActiveX

were

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downloaded about 70

times

in the first

week

,

then

,

this

number

increased to approximately 95 and 110

times

in the second and third weeks of

period

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.

However

, we see a slight decrease in the

number

of its downloading to about 90

times

in

the

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week

4 and

then

, we had a significant rise again to reach a peak of 125

times

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in the

last

week

. Java and Net were downloaded about 45 and 35times in the first

week

but the Java has become more popular among people and the

number

of its download witnessed a moderate rise until the end of the

period

to about 55, 60, 70 and 80 until the end of the

period

in each

week

respectively.

While

,

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the

number

of Net application downloading

had

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experienced a fall trend until the third

week

and

then

it gained

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popularity to 40 and 50

times

downloading in

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week

4 and 5 in sequence.