The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The bar graph illustrates how much
time
and in what ways Chinese
, American, Turkish
, and Brazilian tourists spent their leisure time
while
visiting Greece on a day in August 2019.
Overall
, the Chinese
spent most of their time
reading books, while
the Brazilian liked chilling at the beach the most. American and Turkish
visitors enjoyed their stay by balancing the three activities. Visiting places was the least popular activity for each nationality.
Reading books was popular among all ethnicity, in fact
all of them spent more than 4 Add the comma(s)
,fact
hours
on books on average. Appealing is that the Chinese
used 8 hours
, which is the highest time
spent on all the activities. On the other hand
, we can see that sites seeing was unpopular. The Chinese
spent only an hour, 3 hours
for the Americans and the Turkish
, and 2 for the Brazilians. Time
spent on the beach varied by nationality. The Chinese
spent the least: only 3 hours
. When it comes to Turkish
tourists they used 5 hours
of their daily time
, an hour more than Americans. The nationality which liked laying on the beach the most was Brazilian spending 6 hours
on average.Submitted by leokuwayama03 on
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