Your friend has been offered a place on a cource at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an letter to your friend Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university Recommend the best way to for him/her to look for accommodation Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accomodation

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Dear Raman, Hope

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letter finds you in your radiant spirit.How is everything going and what about the weather in India?

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,I am astonished to know that you are planning to pursue your business studies at Algoma University,Toronto.I am congratulating you for working so hard and achieving your goal. As you know that I had been a student at

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institution for the

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four years so I really want to give you some suggestions about the accommodation as it is the first time that you are going abroad with your family and it is

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a big opportunity for you. You can easily search for accommodation through the Kajiji app or Facebook.So,I would like to suggest you rent a room or a basement near your university so that it can be easy for you to travel

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you need to wait for the buses for long hours. Regards, Kiran

kiranbaidwan064Sun Jun 25 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

150 words

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