Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job others believe that it would be better to go, straight into work and get experience instead
When
many people claim that Correct word choice
While
diploma
which is Correct article usage
a diploma
taking
through university is way to a useful job for Wrong verb form
taken
human
,others think that it would be the most useful Fix the agreement mistake
humans
into
work once purpose several reasons with clear Change preposition
for
example
for Fix the agreement mistake
examples
this
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views
.
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view
day by day
demand for Add a hyphen
day-by-day
employees
who are finished university Use synonyms
are
increasing because the rate of their knowledge Correct subject-verb agreement
is
contribute
particularly to improve Change the verb form
contributes
of
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apply
company
.Correct article usage
the company
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,nowadays Linking Words
company
sign with Fix the agreement mistake
companies
foreign
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a foreign
country
and need Fix the agreement mistake
countries
employees
who Use synonyms
is
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are
experiment
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experimenting
for
conservation with foreign people.If they learned a variety of Change preposition
with
language
associated with their job and become own their idea related to Fix the agreement mistake
languages
devolepment
Correct your spelling
development
project
, they will achieve Fix the agreement mistake
projects
preferred
salary.Correct pronoun usage
their preferred
And
Correct word choice
As
resulted
Replace the word
result
in
they will create own their career with Change preposition
apply
Linking Words
this
wages and these companies will compare with Correct pronoun usage
these
other
through these Fix the agreement mistake
others
employees
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the number of experiment students who are working enough in many nations.Linking Words
This
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that
they learned Correct word choice
apply
programme
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the programme
with
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apply
clear
.Change the word
clearly
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as students are created new Linking Words
project
with their learned knowledge and even they will teach Fix the agreement mistake
projects
to
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apply
other
in the future.Fix the agreement mistake
others
In
Change preposition
As
result
,Correct article usage
a result
youth
will be perfect as their teachers and so government are so impressed and are Correct article usage
the youth
move
to tears by Change the form of the verb
moved
this
situation.
In a nutshell,educated workers and Linking Words
employees
who are not studying in university have both important Use synonyms
part
of life and play Change to a plural noun
parts
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an equally
equally
role.To my Change the adverb
equal
mind
in Add a comma
,mind
companies
the number of both Add a comma
,companies
of
people Change preposition
apply
are
some.Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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