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Some people think that the Internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are becoming more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In
this
 modern era, with the advancement in technology, the internet has become a
life-line
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lifeline
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 for many
people
. On one hand, there are folks who believe that online applications have brought
people
 closer to one another
while
 on
other
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the other
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 hand, there are folks who think that the internet has
lead
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 to isolation.
This
 essay will discuss both
thes
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these
the
 views in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, through various inventions and development on the web, humans can now communicate with each other even
through
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over
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 long distances. Online applications like Instagram, WhatsApp and Facebook
has
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have
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 helped a number of citizens to search for
people
 all across the globe.
For example
, in the year 2021, with the help of a Facebook Community, a mother was able to find her long-lost daughter.
Nevertheless
, the web has
also
 brought along a number of cons.
Firstly
, folks nowadays spend less time with their family members as they are highly distracted by various social content found on the net.
Secondly
,
this
 in turn has caused humans to develop feelings of loneliness
along with
 mental illnesses that include anxiety, stress and depression. Citizens tend to compare their lives with the
people
 they find on social media which leads to
building
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 of self-doubt and self-sabotage. In conclusion,
although
 the web has helped humans to look for each other and connect with different
people
 all around the world, my views incline more towards the disadvantages that the net has brought along. It causes
people
 to doubt themselves and develop different mental illnesses.
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