The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billioin) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three catagories, from 1995-2002. Summarises the information by selection and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the number of
minutes
from 1995 to 2002 that were called in the UK and they are divided into three groups.
According to
the given chart, the local phone line
that was used in 1999 was the highest significance. On an opposite, the call line
remained at the lowerest level in 1995. Phone call for the national and international-fixed line
was similar in 2001 and 2002. Like the way of national and internal-fixed lines
, local-fixed lines
were almost similar in 1998 and 1999.
Furthermore
, the local phone line
was used for around about 72 minutes
( in billions ) while
the all calls line
was 3 minutes
(billions). In the chart, any calls in 2002 were nearly 40 minutes
(in billions) higher than in 1995. Therefore
, any calls had been rising as an upward trend from 1995 to 2002. On the other hand
, the local line
had been gradually going up and reached the highest level in 1999 and moderately fall until 2002.
In contrast
, the community in the UK will have to use both all calls, national and international-fixed lines
more than local-fixed lines
in the future.Submitted by cherrynyunt9 on
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