Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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rail

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lines

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of highways. I totally agree with

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statement, because the

railways

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are environmentally friendly,

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minimize

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the number

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of accidents

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roads

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on roads

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. To being with, there are several reasons why I believe authorities should

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the

railways

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rather than

roads

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.

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, if the governments do not make improvements in highways,

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can discourage

people

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to use their private vehicles , and

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this

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can make

people

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prefer to use

railways

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.

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,

this

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step can

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the number of cars

in

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our

roads

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, which means

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global warming and climate change will mitigate.

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is because

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most Co2 emissions which

harmful

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environment

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comes

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from

fumes

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of cars.

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,

invest

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money in

rail

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networks can provide many job

opportunity

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opportunities

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and income for local

people

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.

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, thousands of employees will work as

trains

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drivers,

waiters

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and waiters

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for commuters.

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a result,

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invest

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can minimize the rate of poverty and crime in society.

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,

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most accidents

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our

roads

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result

of

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bad human errors namely, sudden

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or turn left,

overspeed

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, which means by

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people

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to utilize

rail

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networks the number of accidents will decline.

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is because

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most

of

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trains captains are

professional

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and they received better training than those who drive cars.

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,

rail

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networks can help to protect

people

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to get injuries or even death,

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also

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then

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reduce the pressure

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healthcare

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system. In conclusion, I strongly believe

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lawmakers should invest money in

railways

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rather than

roads

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, because the

railways

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are eco-friendly, and contribute to

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the

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percentage of incidents on our

roads

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.