The society is based on rules and laws. The society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they want. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The

society

is regulated by regulations and

laws

, and it is unable to maintain the

society

fully functional

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if individuals have access to do whatever they want freely. Personally, I strongly agree with

this

idea and my reasons will be given in the following essay. There is no doubt that detrimental effects come with the absence of

laws

and rules.

To begin

with, the absence of

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regulations will break the supply-demand chain that maintains

society

's function. If people flood to one profession that produces excess profit than any other areas,

according to

the

economy

rule, the products in

this

section will soon be over-produced,

consequently

have a drop in value and people will

then

leave and gather in another field repetitively .

This

will produce periodic

crisis

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in the

economy

and

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harm

to

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society

.

Moreover

, it is widely known that all the methods that lead to instant richness are written

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laws

, and the

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freedom in one

society

will inevitably drive manufacturers to make products which

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harm

to

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public health and cause long-lasting poisoning

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to the environment.

As a result

, the increase

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illness rate and the decrease

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food production caused by that will

also

forbid

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society

from functioning well.

In addition

, beneficial consequences

also

arise from the regulations. Obviously, the

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existence of those

laws

contributes to the

economy

. As I mentioned above, people are keen on seeking

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more profit, the regulation of law forces merchants and companies to seek better techniques and management methods, to gain more profit than their peers without breaking the law, resulting in the self-driven development of technology. It not only contributes to the

economy

but

also

leads to the evolution of the

society

itself.

To conclude

, I strongly believe that it is essential for everybody in the world to obey the rules, and our

society

cannot operate well without

laws

and social norms.