The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph illustrates the travelling of
visitors
to a particular Caribbean island
over the 7 years starting from 2010.
Overall
, the number of tourists visiting the island
always increased during the whole period, additionally
the figure for Add a comma
,additionally
visitors
staying on cruise ships was lower than that for those choosing to stay on island
Add an article
the island
during
most of the time.
in terms of tourists staying on Change preposition
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island
, was always on the top among Add an article
the island
of
other Change preposition
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visitors
leaving on cruise ships, except in 2016 onwards was dropped, whereas
visitors
as
cruise ships significantly increase from 2013 after the decrease Change preposition
to
on
2012.
in summary, the total number of tourists always increases during the period of visiting a particular Caribbean Change preposition
in
island
from 2010 till 2017.Submitted by yassinm1211 on
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