The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
The given diagram highlights information about the way of generating electricity in a station of power concerning hydroelectric.
Overall
, it can be seen that the whole System is divided into two parts at which point an array of duties have been done during the day Linking Words
while
the turning back process Linking Words
have
been done at night.
Looking at the details, a high-level reservoir has putten Correct subject-verb agreement
has
on
the way of the River with a Dam on top of it and Change preposition
in
also
it is integral to mention that the Intake is open during the day; Linking Words
however
, it becomes closed at night.
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Following
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this
, there is a pump that makes water flow into the generator with the aim of generating electricity during the day a turbine is Linking Words
also
taken place to help Linking Words
this
system works well and at night it pumps water back into a high-level reservoir .
On top of the generator special lines are allocated to the National grip. Linking Words
Subsequently
, on the right hand of the generator, a low-Level reservoir is put at which point gives a helping hand to the whole process.Linking Words
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