The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
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The given diagram highlights information about the way of generating electricity in a station of power concerning hydroelectric.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the whole System is divided into two parts at which point an array of duties have been done during the day
while
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the turning back process
have
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been done at night. Looking at the details, a high-level reservoir has putten
on
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in
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the way of the River with a Dam on top of it and
also
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it is integral to mention that the Intake is open during the day;
however
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, it becomes closed at night.
Following
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this
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, there is a pump that makes water flow into the generator with the aim of generating electricity during the day a turbine is
also
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taken place to help
this
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system works well and at night it pumps water back into a high-level reservoir . On top of the generator special lines are allocated to the National grip.
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, on the right hand of the generator, a low-Level reservoir is put at which point gives a helping hand to the whole process.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Reservoir
  • Penstock
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Transformer
  • High voltage
  • Renewable energy
  • Kinetic energy
  • Potential energy
  • Power grid
  • Sustainable
  • Flow rate
  • Energy conversion
  • Hydraulic pressure
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