A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter -Describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team. -Summarize the benefits of paying for the concerts. -Say how you think the company should spend the money.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am a resident of Long Thanh
town
. I am writing
this
letter to express my gratitude towards your goodwill towards our
town
as well as
give my suggestions. On the one hand, sponsoring sports teams for local
children
brings several rewards.
First,
this
increases the general health of
children
as the team will keep them away from a sedentary lifestyle and boost them to be more energetic. More importantly, when
children
are occupied with the team, they are less likely to become involved in social evils
such
as violence or drug abuse. Obviously,
this
benefits families and society as well.
On the other hand
, outdoor concerts are a good chance for people to meet up and let off some steam, as it has been ages since there were common activities for
town
dwellers.
Therefore
, I believe the vibe of the concerts will let people have a lot of fun.
However
, the mood will soon disappear,
while
the sports team proves to benefit the
town
in the long run. I always think that the welfare of
children
should be put on top priority. I hope that you will bear in mind my recommendation. Yours faithfully, Maria Do
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