In the future, it may be necessary for us to live on another planet. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now researching planets that could be a possible home, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Earth
is the only planet in the solar system that has an atmosphere, life can exist.
Due to
advancment
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advances
in science and technology,
humans
can travel to other habitable
planets
to spend the rest of their life. A group of traditionalists claims, that
community
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should invest in the
research
of new habitable
planets
and how they can be suitable for
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to survive like Mars. I totally disagree and do not believe that it would be worth it for each individual to invest money in finding new
planets
, in these looming paragraphs I will discuss my views. To commence with, Nasa and many other space agencies have sent rovers and satellites to
research
Mars, whether
humans
can survive or not, and how to make its atmosphere similar to
Earth
.
According to
scientists, it will take more than 200 years to make Mars habitable for living.
Additionally
, it can take more than thousands of years to reach another habitable planet because all these
planets
exist outside the solar system.
Thus
, it will not be worth spending all savings on the exploration of new
planets
,
instead
of that
humans
can make
Earth
100% pollution free which will significantly resolve all problems.
However
, it is an undeniable fact that the Sun's size is increasing every year,
due to
which the gravitational pull is
also
increasing and
Earth
is orbiting closer to the Sun, as predicted in thousands of years one day will come when
Earth
will be sucked by the Sun
due to
immense gravitational pull.
Therefore
it is essential for each individual to invest a large amount of their money in
research
of another habitable planet where
humans
can survive. In a nutshell, each aspect has its pros and cons.
Although
it is important to invest in finding new
planets
so that
humans
can survive on other
planets
, I believe it will not be worth it for each individual to spend money on
research
because we have seen significant growth in technology in one decade
Therefore
, space agencies will easily find new
planets
and figure out the reason how human can travel so far.
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