Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possible. While others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give y our opinion.

Some people believe that

children

should begin formal education as early as possible.

However

,

another

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people believe that it should not begin until 7

years

old. In the following essay, I will discuss a couple of merits and drawbacks and present my own view

at the end

. One advantage is that

children

can start pre-education curriculum rather than others. To be specific, if

children

do pre-education as early as possible, it leads

to

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would not have to review the

study

.

Moreover

, it encourages students to manage

to

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their

study

time

and

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no matter about

assignment

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later.

For example

, my younger brother begins to

study

until 5

years

old, so he

growed

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grew

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accustomed to

study

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such

as math,science and language.

Although

he was hard to

study

because he have to cover all

subject

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with

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listening to online courses, he got

a knowledge

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knowledge

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and can be smart rather than

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friends

.

As a result

,

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situation

make

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him gain confidence and widen

him

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a

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view. Another view is that if

children

who

aged

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until

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7

years

old do not

strat

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start

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study

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studying

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,

children

are able to get creative

skills

and make

a lots

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of

friends

. Before

children

aged 8

years

old,

This

period plays with

friends

and have to use

sense

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of five

such

as touch,smell,taste,hear and

see

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. Through

this

situation, they can gain useful

skills

, which use unexpected situations everywhere.

For instance

, my younger sister plays not having formal subjects

such

as many instruments and hanging with

friends

every time. From

this

experience, she could get a sense of creative

skills

and social

skills

. In conclusion, Formal education

start

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children

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aged before 7

years

old because of

gaing

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gaining

gaming

more knowledge earlier by doing pre-education.

Whereas

, formal education

start

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children

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aged after 7

years

old because of having creative

skills

and social

skills

. In my opinion, I think the second reason is the best choice as I

mationed

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mentioned

earlier.