You recently did a short cookery courses a cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course write a letter to the coolest director at the cookery school in your letter describe what you enjoy about the course say how much cooking you have done since the course suggest another cookery course you do likes school to offer

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Dear Madam, I am writing

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letter to share my views in regard to the cookery course that I completed at your Rajan cookery institution

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month.

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with,I am very astonished that I am being specialised in making almost 250 Indian dishes and even South-Indian food and I am perfectly making it only because of your help and proper guidance.I loved to work with distinct ladies like me who wants to learn about new recipes and it was a quite good experience. Since I completed the course I try to make over 100 dishes for my family and friends with different ingredients and everybody enjoyed the meals.

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,I recommended my friends join the cooking classes as they want to learn something new. Mam,I would like to suggest that you should encourage males to engage in

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course as they can be good chefs and learn different skills as most of the chefs are men.

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to that,International items should be introduced so that people can have basic knowledge about other dishes too. Hope to get a positive response from your side. Yours sincerely, Kiran

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

185 words

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