The chart summarises the number of nurses in different department in Sunnyside Hospital

The chart summarises the number of nurses in different department in Sunnyside Hospital
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The purpose of
this
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report is to provide data pertaining to the number of
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in hospitals available for every thousand of the population for eight developed countries and the health spending of governments from three countries. The primary thrust of the first dataset is that the figures for Japan and Germany were significantly more than the rest of the included nations. The second set's main theme is a comparison between individual spending on healthcare and the expected lifespan for Japanese, Dutch and American citizens.
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analysis will commence with the chart displaying the number of hospital
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. It can be seen that Japan and Germany have the most
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available for the public at 14 and 8
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per thousand people, respectively. Regarding the other six nations, their values are relatively similar, ranging from roughly 3.5
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for the US up to 4.5
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for the Netherlands. Attention shall now be drawn to the table regarding health expenditures. The most notable feature is that an individual in the US spends $6,719 on average, which is considerably more than in Japan and Netherlands, but has the lowest life expectancy out of the three at only 78.
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, Japanese people generally spend only $2,581 for health but have a lifespan of 83 years.
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, it is worth noting that Dutch residents spend approximately $3,500 and usually live to the age of 80.
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