The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,

science

plays a crucial role in

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aspects of

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life

. In

this

condition, some people claim that scientists are supposed to take the improvement of individuals’

life

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as their major goal. I totally agree with

this

sentiment. On the one hand, scientists in various fields have

had

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saved

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quantity of lives around the world. It is known to all that

science

is significant for preventing people from famine.

For instance

, Yuan Longping, an admirable Chinese agriculturist, was awarded World Food Price

due to

the effort of developing the Hybrid Rice. With

this

technique being introduced to other countries, food security was guaranteed and the quality of

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life

was greatly improved.

Furthermore

, mankind should not ignore the importance that

science

has in human health. Scholars and doctors in

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of medicine are developing new drugs and therapy to fight against cancer and other disease.

As a result

, there is no need for a number of families to experience relatives’ death

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caused by illness.

On the other hand

, scientific research and experiments make advanced technology and incredible inventions possible, which bring huge convenience to humanity. Amount of time and money can be saved in citizens’ daily existence since the Internet has come to the world.

For example

, white-collar workers send e-mails with

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of business documents and other details to their clients or colleagues

in

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distance

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a distance

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,

while

companies could only deliver information through

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office or

means

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of transportation back

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last

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century. In conclusion, I believe that scientists should

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the

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aim

of improving

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to improve

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mankind’s

life

priorly

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. It is not only because

science

solves problems of agriculture and disease, but

also

gives citizens enormous convenience.