Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned from the city center, while others consider this idea an unrealistic solution. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Traffic
jam has become one of the biggest problems nowadays. several people
think that to solve this
issue owned cars
should be banned in city
centres
. This
essay will discuss both sides of view and my opinion .
Many people
want to solve the traffic
issues . There they want privet cars
to be banned in the city
centres
. First , they want to decrease the amount of cars
in the city
centres
. By doing that many traffic
issues will be solved . Many people
who live lives in city
centres
will be using different transportation . Second , if the owned cars
have been banned from the city
centres
the countries will have less pollution. This
is due to
the carbon dioxide that comes from the car's exhaustcars
exhaust will be less .
Correct your spelling
exhaust cars
However
, there are some people
who know that this
is an unrealistic solution . First , the government can not just ban cars
in the centres
of cities . This
is due to
people
already have
multiple Wrong verb form
having
cars
in the city
centres
. Many people
will not allow this
to happen . Second , the other transportation will be crowded . By banning vehicles in city
centres
people
will go to other transportation like the bus or train and taxis . Third , many people
could not go to the city
centres
if this
happen
. They can't because there are some Wrong verb form
happened
people
who have special needs . This
is due to
they need special equipment to transport or visit .
My opinion is the traffic
issues can't be solved by banning cars
in the centres
. However
, there are many ways to solve this
problem . In ,conclusion there are different ways to get away with this
problem . Also
banning cars
in the centres
of cities is not the only solution .Submitted by dr.yushi on
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coherence cohesion
Develop a clear and consistent line of reasoning throughout the essay, and ensure that each paragraph supports the main argument.
task achievement
Provide a more comprehensive response to the task prompt, including both sides of the argument and your own opinion, supported by specific examples and reasons.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite