Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned from the city center, while others consider this idea an unrealistic solution. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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essay will discuss both sides of view and my opinion .
Many Linking Words
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traffic
issues . There they want privet Use synonyms
cars
to be banned in the Use synonyms
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centres
. First , they want to decrease the amount of Use synonyms
cars
in the Use synonyms
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centres
. By doing that many Use synonyms
traffic
issues will be solved . Many Use synonyms
people
who live lives in Use synonyms
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centres
will be using different transportation . Second , if the owned Use synonyms
cars
have been banned from the Use synonyms
city
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centres
the countries will have less pollution. Use synonyms
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is an unrealistic solution . First , the government can not just ban Linking Words
cars
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centres
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to happen . Second , the other transportation will be crowded . By banning vehicles in Linking Words
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people
will go to other transportation like the bus or train and taxis . Third , many Use synonyms
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people
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they need special equipment to transport or visit .
My opinion is the Linking Words
traffic
issues can't be solved by banning Use synonyms
cars
in the Use synonyms
centres
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However
, there are many ways to solve Linking Words
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problem . In ,conclusion there are different ways to get away with Linking Words
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problem . Linking Words
Also
banning Linking Words
cars
in the Use synonyms
centres
of cities is not the only solution .Use synonyms
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coherence cohesion
Develop a clear and consistent line of reasoning throughout the essay, and ensure that each paragraph supports the main argument.
task achievement
Provide a more comprehensive response to the task prompt, including both sides of the argument and your own opinion, supported by specific examples and reasons.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite