Many criminals resort back to crime as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes for this? What effects will this have on society.

Nowadays
crime
is
on
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at
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peak so when the criminal
released
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is released
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so he continues
do
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to
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some crimes in
society
. Because they do not have any other options to do some other work .
That
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have many causes in
society
and they are
threat
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a threat
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for
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to
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the
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society
. To commence with,
lack
of
jobs
is the main reason for
this
because they do not get a good
job
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jobs
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so they do some
crime
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crimes
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like robbery,murder and chain snatching .
Furthermore
, some
criminal
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criminals
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are very good in study and
they
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apply
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are
topper
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toppers
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from
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college
and
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if they do not find their
favorite
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favourite
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jobs
and placement
than
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then
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they do
same
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the same
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online scams and
money
laundering.
Moreover
, in prison there
are
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not a good quality of education they learn only bad things.
Thus
, it is proved that education and
lack
of
jobs
are
are
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the reason for
crime
. There have only bad effects on
the
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apply
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society
.
However
, they are disturbed
with
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by
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those
criminals
. Individuals do hard work for their
family
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families
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and earn
money
while
those
criminals
robbed the
money
.
Most
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The most
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important effect is they are
threat
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a threat
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for
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to
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the
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apply
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life
some
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apply
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times they robbed and
murdered
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the individual.
For instance
, a study found that
the
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individuals are very
carefully
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careful
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about their things but
criminals
had all the news about their life so they
threat
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threaten
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him
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them
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and ask
money
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for money
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and if they denied so they do anything with them and their
family
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families
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. In conclusion,
criminals
have
lack
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a lack
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of education and
lack
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a lack
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of
jobs
are
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is
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the main reason for
crime
.
Moreover
,
criminals
are always bad things for
society
.
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  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recidivism
  • rehabilitation
  • reintegration
  • social stigma
  • discrimination
  • ex-offenders
  • employment opportunities
  • mental health
  • substance abuse
  • criminal networks
  • support systems
  • re-entry
  • incarceration
  • job market
  • social support
  • stability
  • reintegration programs
  • community organizations
  • government services
  • criminogenic
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