Some people think that having people from different nationalities and culture background to a country get a faster development. To what extend do you agree??
In
this
concurrent world , some individuals argue that people
from different countries and cultures are have
more Change the verb form
have
benefit
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benefits
in
Add a hyphen
in-country
country
growth. In fact , I strongly agree with this
point of view for two reasons.
To commence with, people
move to a new country
for a good job and they give their 100 % in this
job so deffinitely
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definitely
country
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the country
get
a good profit . Even though Correct subject-verb agreement
gets
asome
might argue that Correct your spelling
some
a
other nationalities person take more benefit and do some fraud thing so Change the article
an
that is
not a tolerable thing for country
,I Add an article
the country
stil
believe that when any person Correct your spelling
still
go
to Correct subject-verb agreement
goes
the
new Correct article usage
a
country
so they have good
opportunity for promotion and they get good salary and bonus so that time they worked very hard for their personal benefit Add an article
a good
as well as
country
increasing their economy .
Furthermore
, a different culture
person have
some experiences in their own Change the verb form
has
culture
and they apply that tricks and things
in other culture
most of the time they get good Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
response
. To explainFix the agreement mistake
responses
it
, when they try some new Correct pronoun usage
apply
things
with different culture
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cultures
people
so they boost their knowledge and provide some new ideas and employed it
. They share their Correct pronoun usage
them
culturel
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cultural
things
,festival,traditional things
and most important their country
history so Change noun form
country's
people
are more familiar with them . Moreover
, when two and more different culture
people
meet so they share few
extra knowledge and it is good in many ways like they behave friendly and Correct quantifier usage
apply
help
each other. Change the verb form
helps
Thus
, it is proved that that
Remove the redundancy
apply
things
are very beneficial for country
economy and Add an article
the country
developement
.
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development
To conclude
, not only is it good for country
, but Add an article
the country
also
very useful for learning some new culture
Replace the word
cultural
things
and behaiviour
.Correct your spelling
behaviour
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