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graph illustrates a comparison between the closure of shops and opening of new shops from 2011 to 2018.

graph illustrates a comparison between the closure of shops and opening of new shops from 2011 to 2018.
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A glance at the graph provided reveals some shops that opened and closed throughout 7 years in one particular nation.
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, It is divided into two categories which consist of opened and closed merchants,
moreover
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 at the initial
period
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 has shown the outlet opened was the highest by far and followed by the closed.
In contrast
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,
at the end
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 of , the
period
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 the closed one outpaced the open
outlets
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. At the beginning of the
period
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, it clearly can be seen that opened store was the highest by far around 8500
stores
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,
while
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 the closed
outlets
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 were only 6500. In the following years, opening
stores
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 plume to 4000
stores
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,
in contrast
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 with the closed store which slightly fell to 6000.
Furthermore
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, in 2014, the opening and the closed
outlets
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 were recorded in small disparities by less than 100
outlets
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. In the next four years, starting from 2015 it can be clearly seen that closed
stores
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 exponentially fell about 500 and bounced back in the next year which became 5100 and steadily until the end of the
period
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On the other hand
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, the closed opening
stores
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 constituted fell to 4000
stores
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 and constantly changed until 2018 fell again to 3000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, outlets, stores with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 4 times.
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