Some people say reading the news on the internet is better. Others think newspapers will remain the most important sourse of news for the majority of people. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

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tell reading the news on the
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is better. Others think newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of
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. We think reading very easily
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well-known in my country. So it can be we
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lots of important and interesting things.
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people
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believe that the
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is very useful. But, it's had some bad sides. And so much it had important information. So we
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very famous
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about life. And at
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no information we
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lots of useful
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.
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the
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don't believe
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. Because it had some bad things news.
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