The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country.

The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country.
The given line graph illustrates the information about
sales
of three different types of
books
. It is evident that the population showed an upward trend,
whereas
educational
books
and
children
's
books
showed a fluctuating trend. From 2002 to 2003, adult fiction was on top with a sale of 45
million
dollars
, followed by educational
books
at 26
million
dollars
and
children
's
books
at 35
million
dollars
.After a few ,fluctuations the sale of
children
's
books
climbed to 55
million
dollars
by 2006. In ,contrast educational
books
were the least sold in 2002.There was a dramatic escalation in adult fiction by 2006 peaking at 33
million
dollars
Sales
of
children
's
books
started at 32
million
dollars
in 2002
,
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but rose rapidly to 45
million
dollars
in 2003. From 2003 to 2005 there was a very slight increase in
sales
, but after 2005,
sales
grew considerably and reached an all-time high of 56
million
.
Overall
,
children
's
books
became a trend in 2006
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