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The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country.

The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country.
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The given line graph illustrates the information about
sales
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 of three different types of
books
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. It is evident that the population showed an upward trend,
whereas
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 educational
books
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 and
children
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's
books
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 showed a fluctuating trend. From 2002 to 2003, adult fiction was on top with a sale of 45
million
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dollars
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, followed by educational
books
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 at 26
million
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dollars
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 and
children
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's
books
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 at 35
million
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dollars
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.After a few ,fluctuations the sale of
children
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's
books
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 climbed to 55
million
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dollars
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 by 2006. In ,contrast educational
books
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 were the least sold in 2002.There was a dramatic escalation in adult fiction by 2006 peaking at 33
million
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dollars
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Sales
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 of
children
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's
books
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 started at 32
million
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dollars
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 in 2002
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 but rose rapidly to 45
million
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dollars
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 in 2003. From 2003 to 2005 there was a very slight increase in
sales
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, but after 2005,
sales
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 grew considerably and reached an all-time high of 56
million
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.
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,
children
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's
books
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 became a trend in 2006
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, books, children, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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