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The internet has made traditional libraries unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss giving examples from your own knowledge andexperience.

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It is argued that the Internet has taken over traditional libraries and has made them go out of business. I agree with
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 opinion as finding books has become simpler and has
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 reduced the cost of heavy library subscriptions. The first reason for my agreement is that without visiting the libraries one can find a book of their interest merely by searching through the web as compared to previously when it was a time-consuming activity to locate the book, where sometimes it used to be
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 taken by someone else or non-availability. It has
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 become more convenient to get multiple publications at a certain point.
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, on, Amazon a person can either buy a book, rent an electronic version or download the pdf files. A
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 reason is that traditional libraries used to have hefty fees for membership to use the library, even if a person is not availing of the benefits. There was a case where someone has moved from the city and had forgotten to cancel the membership resulted in affecting their credit score
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 nonpayment of the fees,
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 that there were costs associated when the books were returned after the due date in terms of late submission.
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, when I was younger, we used to access a library in our neighbourhood which used to charge us $50 every month to use the facilities.
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, I firmly believe that
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 the fact of the Internet finding and getting books is much easier than previously and resulted in saving some money.
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