The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates how many
surveys
were collected domestically across 3 specific methods in a particular metropolis during the first half of 2011. Use synonyms
Overall
, the number of questionnaires received via letter/email dropped slightly, Linking Words
whereas
those via the rest observed rises of varying degrees, with the most pronounced growth being seen in direct interviews. It is Linking Words
also
reported that the vast majority of feedback was collected directly.
Looking first at the numbers via telephone and in-person, the former commenced the period with around 900 Linking Words
surveys
, which was 500 Use synonyms
surveys
more than the corresponding figure for the latter, at approximately 400 Use synonyms
surveys
. Use synonyms
Thereafter
, there was a moderate elevation in the Linking Words
telephone's
statistics, finishing at about 1600 Change noun form
telephone
surveys
in Jun. Similar changes, but to a much greater extent, can be seen in the face-to-face Use synonyms
enquiries'
data, with a fivefold increase to just shy of 2000 Change noun form
enquiries
surveys
Use synonyms
at the end
.
Turning to the remaining method, almost 800 Linking Words
surveys
were accumulated via letter/email, ending at about 400 Use synonyms
surveys
and levelled off towards the end.Use synonyms
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