The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates how many
surveys
were collected domestically across 3 specific methods in a particular metropolis during the first half of 2011.
Overall
, the number of questionnaires received via letter/email dropped slightly,
whereas
those via the rest observed rises of varying degrees, with the most pronounced growth being seen in direct interviews. It is
also
reported that the vast majority of feedback was collected directly. Looking first at the numbers via telephone and in-person, the former commenced the period with around 900
surveys
, which was 500
surveys
more than the corresponding figure for the latter, at approximately 400
surveys
.
Thereafter
, there was a moderate elevation in the
telephone's
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statistics, finishing at about 1600
surveys
in Jun. Similar changes, but to a much greater extent, can be seen in the face-to-face
enquiries'
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data, with a fivefold increase to just shy of 2000
surveys
at the end
. Turning to the remaining method, almost 800
surveys
were accumulated via letter/email, ending at about 400
surveys
and levelled off towards the end.
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  • number of inquiries
  • Tourist Information Office
  • six-month period
  • increased steadily
  • reached a peak
  • decreased slightly
  • increased dramatically
  • experienced a gradual decline
  • general trend
  • highest number
  • lowest number
  • significant increase
  • tourism interest
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