Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,

Artists

play a vital role in a country, when they contribute

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of the nation

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their works of

art

. People hold conflicting views about whether creative

artists

should be given financial

support

or funded by alternative sources.

While

people believed that designers ought to be supported by other sources. I would argue both opinions before forming my point of view. On the one hand,

artists

deserve economic

support

from the government

due to

the fact that music and arts are considered

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a symbol of a country.

Moreover

, all the creative works of

art

are the source of artist's

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matter, so they need the government's help to boost their imagination.

Artists

also

have incredible talent to make things alive, which can enhance the quality of life.

Furthermore

,

art

and music show the lifestyle of the author so

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emotions should be shared easily.

For instance

,

many

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artists

, who aren’t well-known but their outstanding

skill

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, governments can make offers with financial

support

for them to increase their popularity worldwide.

In addition

, without funding,

artists

can not develop their paintings and melodies.

On the other hand

, when we are living in a state-of-the-

art

society with the innovation of technical devices.

Artists

such

as musicians,

painters

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can get a huge attraction easily from the public via social media platforms like Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter, which can provide them

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followers and well-paid jobs. The reason is that they can showcase their talented skills to social media companies, which can afford them everything about the demands of their areas, it is

also

an opportunity for them to enhance

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of

life

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.

To conclude

, With the tenacity of

artists

and their

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matter, when they are trying to improve

art

all over the world. From my point of view,

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deserve to be given financial

support

from governments and other sources