The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The picture presents the scheme of manufacturing
chocolate
that includes several different cares
in the making. Correct your spelling
cakes
Overall
, the process consists of ten steps, including harvesting, fermentation, roasting, and crushing the chocolate
beans
.
To start with, chocolate
is made from the cacao tree, which grows in South America, Africa, and Indonesia. The first step is
to wait for the pods of the tree until they are mature enough to be harvested,
when they are ripened and red. Remove the comma
apply
Next,
the white cocoa beans
are taken from inside the pods. Then
the white beans
are dried in the sun after being fermented. In this
step, the beans
changed to darker colours. As a result
, dried chocolate
beans
would be placed in a large sack, then
transported to the factory. The transportation used is either trains or lorries.
In the factory, the harvested and dried beans
are heated. The beans
would be poured into a separating machine where it spun, removing the crushed beans
and outer shells. Last
but not least, the inner part of the beans
is pressed, producing liquid chocolate
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