The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The picture presents the scheme of manufacturing
chocolate
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that includes several different
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in the making.
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, the process consists of ten steps, including harvesting, fermentation, roasting, and crushing the
chocolate
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beans
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. To start with,
chocolate
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is made from the cacao tree, which grows in South America, Africa, and Indonesia.
The first step is
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to wait for the pods of the tree until they are mature enough to be harvested
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when they are ripened and red.
Next,
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the white cocoa
beans
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are taken from inside the pods.
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the white
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are dried in the sun after being fermented. In
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step, the
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changed to darker colours.
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, dried
chocolate
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beans
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would be placed in a large sack,
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transported to the factory. The transportation used is either trains or lorries. In the factory, the harvested and dried
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are heated. The
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would be poured into a separating machine where it spun, removing the crushed
beans
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and outer shells.
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but not least, the inner part of the
beans
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is pressed, producing liquid
chocolate
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