Your family is going to celebrate an occassion and your child needs a day off from school. Write a letter to the head master of the school. What the occassion is? Why it is importnat that your child attends the celebration? How your child is going to make up for the missed lessons.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request a day off from school for Marty

due to

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an important family gathering

this

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Tuesday. Allow me to elaborate on

this

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situation. As you may know, Marty`s father, Emmet, is working for the space company as a technical consultant. Two weeks

ago

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ago,

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he was honoured to be invited on a mission to the International Space Station

and

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, and

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this

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Tuesday

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Tuesday,

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he is coming back home.

That is

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why we are preparing a warm welcome party. My son is extremely proud of his father and always looks after him. He is so excited to

finally

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meet his hero. Marty spent days preparing a song as a present and looking forward to being at home when Emmet arrives. We fully understand that Marty has to catch up on the missed lessons. We will ask his friend Jessica to bring his books and homework assignments

and

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I will make sure that

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child

will do

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them

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the weekend. Look forward to hearing from you. Kind Regards, Daulet Tumbayev.

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Jun 27, 2023

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coherence cohesion

Break the letter into small parts. Use a new short paragraph for each main point (the reason, the plan to catch up, and the closing note).

task response

Be clearer on why the day off helps the child and what the school can do to help with work. Add a quick plan to make up work with specific days or tasks.

tone

Polite and formal tone

content

The letter states the day off and the plan to catch up on work

structure

Opening and closing are present

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

174 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Dear
Headmaster
I
am
writing
to
ask
for
one
day
off
for
my
child
due
to
a
family
occasion
Our
family
will
celebrate
our
grandmother's
birthday
This
is
an
important
time
for
us
to
be
together
and
show
our
love
The
child
will
make
up
missed
lessons
homework
notes
from
the
teacher
classmates
read
set
reading
complete
tasks
write
a
short
summary
return
on
time
weekend
contact
information
Thank
you
for
your
understanding

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