The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph illustrates that
how many Correct word choice
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enquiries
the Tourist Information Office received in three ways in a specific area from January to June in
2011. The query can be sent in person, by Change preposition
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letter
/email, and by telephone.
Overall
, enquiries
received in person notably increased over six months. Additionally
, enquiries
sent by letter
/email also
gradually soared up, even though there was a slight decrease in February. On the other hand
, inquiry
by call up incredibly fell and plummeted.
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an inquiry
the inquiry
Firstly
, while
the number of enquiries
in person was 400 in January, it continuously soared up
. Change preposition
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As a result
, it surpassed the number of enquiries
by letter
/email between February and March. In addition
, it outweighed telephone figures at the end
of March.
Secondly
, although
the figures for letter
/emails started with around 800, they ended up with approximately 400 enquires. Fix the agreement mistake
letters
However
, 800 enquiries
by phone in January reached to
1600 in June.Change preposition
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Vocabulary: Replace the words enquiries, letter with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "soared" was used 2 times.
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