The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figures illustrate the developments which took place in an industrial region in the
town
of Norbiton to urbanise more and more.
Overall
, what stands out from the maps is that an industrial place in the
town
used to be an industrial area,
although
, it is planned to create significant changes to become a residential area. Regarding the north of the
town
, a factory will be destroyed and there will be an erection of various houses.
Additionally
, a playground will be built to the south of the river. The number of houses would be more than the number of factories. As for the south of the
town
, a factory to the south-west of the city centre will be converted into shops.
Furthermore
, a medical centre will be established to the
south-west
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southwest
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of the bigger square. A school will be experienced an introduction in the east of the
town
.
Additionally
, two factories will be disappeared to convert into a vast range of accommodation, between the school and medical centre. Another substantial development would be the creation of a new square in the south of the
town
.
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