The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.

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The bar charts compare the short-time employees in the United Kingdom's countries in 1980 and 2010.

Overall

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it is clear that

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Wales and England were higher than Northern

Ireland

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and

Scotland

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Also

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in 2010, part-time workers were more than in 1980 except in Northern

Ireland

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Firstly

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, there was the highest percentage in Wales was nearly %35 and followed by England was just above %30 in 2010.

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, they were similar to 1980 but, less than 2010. England was approximately %25 and Wales we just over %30.

On the other hand

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, Northern

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and

Scotland

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were completely different from each other. In 1980 NorthernNorthen

Ireland

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was around %25,

otherwise

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Scotland

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was just above %10. when we at in 2010,

Ireland

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went down and it was over %10.

However

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Scotland

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increased to just belove %20.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words ireland, scotland with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

133 words

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The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.

People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than people who lived in previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Freshwater is a limited resource in certain regions of the world. Today, the escalating demand has transformed it into a global problem. What are the causes of increasing demand? What measures can governments and individuals take to respond to the problem?

First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job. To what extent do you agree?

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.