The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.
The bar charts compare the short-time employees in the United Kingdom's countries in 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
Wales and England were higher than Northern Ireland
and Scotland
. Also
in 2010, part-time workers were more than in 1980 except in Northern Ireland
.
Firstly
, there was the highest percentage in Wales was nearly %35 and followed by England was just above %30 in 2010. Also
, they were similar to 1980 but, less than 2010. England was approximately %25 and Wales we just over %30.
On the other hand
, Northern Ireland
and Scotland
were completely different from each other. In 1980 NorthernNorthen Ireland
was around %25, otherwise
, Scotland
was just above %10. when we at in 2010, Ireland
went down and it was over %10. However
, Scotland
increased to just belove %20.Submitted by yadigaragar on
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