The graph below shows UK air pollutants in millions of tons, from three different sources, between 1990 and 2005.

The graph below shows UK air pollutants in millions of tons, from three different sources, between 1990 and 2005.
The line chart provides information about the
air
pollutants
from three different sources in millions of tonnes in the UK from 1990 to 2005. In general, there was a downward trend, except for
transport
modes in the given time period, and
also
a switch in the position between
transport
and industry sources
at the end
of the time period. Based on the total number of
air
pollutants
, there was a downward tendency with 2
million
, from 1900 (8
million
) until 2005 (6
million
).
Moreover
, regarding the industry-based, at the beginning of the time period, the number of
air
pollutants
stood in the top spot until 1999 and
then
fell down with the same amount with the
transport
of 3
million
, before jumped slowly by 1
million
and was the second place as 2
million
.
Furthermore
,
transport
and households started with the same amount in 1990 with 1
million
;
however
,
transport
modes showed a fluctuating trend between 1993 to 1999 and
then
rose gradually by 2
million
and was the first rank to 3
million
in 2005.
On the other hand
,
households
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sources remained stable between 1993 to 1999 and experienced a slight decrease from 2002 to 2005 by 1
million
, and there were no
air
pollutants
from households in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, transport, million with synonyms.
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