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the diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant

the diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant
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the given map displays the floor plan of a public library from 20 years ago and how it appears in the present.
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, the library layout has been updated to include more advanced facilities, which have been entirely replaced with certain diversification in
this
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 library branch. The developments have included spaces for events and more resources. On the top left corner, there used to be a section for computer and video games, which has been replaced by an area for holding storytelling events including children’s fiction
books
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 and two sofas. The lecture
room
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 now occupies the space where the children’s book used to be, opposite the cafe store, taking the place of the previous enquiry desk. The adult non-fiction
books
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 space between the lecture
room
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 and cafe has been reconstructed into a place of adult fiction
books
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 and an information desk, the feature of self-service machines has
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 been added in
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 area. The central feature used to have two round-shaped tables surrounded by seats, which have now been demolished for open space. The reading
room
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 on the left side of the entrance was constructed as a computer
room
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. In front of
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 computer
room
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, which previously housed a place for adult fiction
books
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, now features a section for all reference
books
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • undergo changes
  • reading room
  • central area
  • digital resources
  • physical books
  • collections
  • children's section
  • multimedia room
  • cater to
  • diverse needs
  • study rooms
  • private study spaces
  • reception area
  • modernized
  • shelving units
  • open spaces
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