A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time work. You would like to do some part-time work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the part-time work. In your letter Explain why you want to do part-time work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be avialable for work

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the part-time position that has opened up at the museum. The reason why I want to apply is because I have always had a great interest in history and nature, and as a
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I would love to visit the art section. I was
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excited by the exhibits on display about nature
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as the type of species found in the Amazon.
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, I want to instil that natural curiosity in the next generation so that they can have a better appreciation of the museum. I would be suited for
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role as I have experience in giving talks for my college, so I will be able to give guided tours to the visitors, on exhibits I am familiar with.
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, I am well versed with computers,
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, I will be effective with administrative work
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as using Excel to make a timetable for the displays. I will only be able to work on weekends
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I will be able to work during the whole day to reduce the burden on the other employees. I look forward to your response. Yours sincerely, Ibrahim Mohammad Zaman
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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