the system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. this is causing problems for you and your neighbours. write a letter to the local rubbish collection system is not working properly. write a letter to the local council. in your letter describe how the ruubish collection system is not working properly explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours suugest what should be done about the problem

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Dear sir, My self Shizune Kawaguchi. I am writing

this

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letter to draw your attention towards

such

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problems we facing in our

society

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like not properly collecting rubbish. We live in a Sarvoday

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, Tp-10.

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with,I have to

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you that our garbages are full of rubbish because your workers are not collecting them

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the

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scheduled time.

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, if they come we do not aware of that.One more thing they only came twice or thrice a week.

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, On other days we face much trouble.

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, Our few

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members were ill

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dirtiness and In our

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the mosquitoes and bees are increased and street dogs

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came for eating food.

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, it causes so much trouble

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our

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children

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. They are afraid of dogs and do not go outside of the house for playing. I have some small suggestions towards

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. Ask your municipal worker why they are doing

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and if they get less salary kindly do something immediately. Yours faithfully, Shizune Kawaguchi.

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