the system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. this is causing problems for you and your neighbours. write a letter to the local rubbish collection system is not working properly. write a letter to the local council. in your letter describe how the ruubish collection system is not working properly explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours suugest what should be done about the problem

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Dear sir, My self Shizune Kawaguchi. I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention towards
such
problems we facing in our
society
like not properly collecting rubbish. We live in a Sarvoday
society
, Tp-10.
To begin
with,I have to
informe
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inform
you that our garbages are full of rubbish because your workers are not collecting them
on
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the
the
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scheduled time.
Moreover
, if they come we do not aware of that.One more thing they only came twice or thrice a week.
Thus
, On other days we face much trouble.
Furthermore
, Our few
society
members were ill
due to
dirtiness and In our
society
the mosquitoes and bees are increased and street dogs
also
came for eating food.
Therefore
, it causes so much trouble
to
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our
child
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. They are afraid of dogs and do not go outside of the house for playing. I have some small suggestions towards
this
. Ask your municipal worker why they are doing
this
and if they get less salary kindly do something immediately. Yours faithfully, Shizune Kawaguchi.
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