The given diagram illustrates the way soft cheese is made through many steps.

The given diagram illustrates the way soft cheese is made through many steps.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The given diagram illustrates the way soft cheese is made through many steps.
The given diagram illustrates the way soft cheese is made through many steps.
Overall
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It is clear that
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there are five periods to making the final product, commencing with raw materials including Water and Milk and finishing with Soft cheese. Looking at the diagram,
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the first
step
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, Water and Milk must be
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together to create a new
mixture
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.
Next,
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this
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material has to be cooled at a temperature of 5°C for 2 hours before adding salt and coming to the third
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. At the fermentation stage, the
mixture
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must be fermented at 35°C for the same amount of time
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the second process. After that, next to the evaporation
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,
this
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mixture
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must be heated at 100°C for 8 hours to let the water in the material steam. At the final
step
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, the
mixture
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has to be cooled at the same temperature
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the prior cooling
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for 8 hours and
also
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be mixed before being filtered to divi

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words step, mixture with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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