The given diagram illustrates the way soft cheese is made through many steps.
The given diagram illustrates the way soft cheese is made through many steps.
Overall
, It is clear that
there are five periods to making the final product, commencing with raw materials including Water and Milk and finishing with Soft cheese.
Looking at the diagram, at
the first Change preposition
in
step
, Water and Milk must be mixing
together to create a new Wrong verb form
mixed
mixture
. Next,
this
material has to be cooled at a temperature of 5°C for 2 hours before adding salt and coming to the third step
. At the fermentation stage, the mixture
must be fermented at 35°C for the same amount of time at
the second process.
After that, next to the evaporation Change preposition
as
step
, this
mixture
must be heated at 100°C for 8 hours to let the water in the material steam. At the final step
, the mixture
has to be cooled at the same temperature at
the prior cooling Change preposition
as
step
for 8 hours and also
be mixed before being filtered to diviSubmitted by joyce.ta213 on
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