Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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people
claim that individuals should be responsible for their own health and meals Use synonyms
whereas
others believe the authority needs to take Linking Words
this
into their consideration and guide citizens on what they should eat. From my perspective, society should rely on themselves to live a healthy lifestyle.
There are many benefits for individuals to look after their own diet. Linking Words
Firstly
and most importantly, the public has different dietary needs regarding their figures, routines and lifestyle and no one else knows better about Linking Words
this
than oneself. Linking Words
People
can make better choices based on the whole picture of themselves rather than following a general plan which is designed for a Use synonyms
nation
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For example
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people
who work Use synonyms
in
a construction site require more carbohydrates and protein than others in order to get enough nutrition for their bodies.
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On the other hand
, in many situations, the Linking Words
government
's guidance is vital and it leads the Use synonyms
nation
to prosperity. Taking the Use synonyms
nation
's health status under control results in a rise in the population of healthy Use synonyms
people
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Consequently
, fewer Linking Words
people
are sick and employees can work more hours, which drives up the country's economy. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
government
can easily access new findings and research which means the guidance from the Use synonyms
government
is more reasonable and reliable than an individual's idea. Especially for the Use synonyms
people
who are not well educated.
In conclusion, I believe individuals should take the main responsibility because it maximizes their own benefits Use synonyms
however
, the Linking Words
government
's control brings positive aspects to the Use synonyms
nation
's development and helps Use synonyms
people
who cannot access reliable resources about nutrition.Use synonyms
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