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More and more plastic waste has polluted cities, countrysides, and oceans. What problems does it cause and what measures can be taken?

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In
this
 modern world,
Plastic
 waste is one of the reasons for pollution and a deadly cause to
a
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 server of
this
 planet. Increasingly cities, rural areas and oceans have been polluted by
plastic
 waste.
However
, it causes tremendous effects on
this
 planet and effecting living organisms around it. Let's discuss some of the main problems and
also
 look out for their solutions in the subsequent paragraph. To commence with,
plastic
 is a non-biodegradable thing which means it will not disappear or decompose with soil, water and land and it has toxic chemicals in it which generate pollution around it. To explicate, when
plastic
 waste had been eaten by any animal or bird, there is a 90% chance of death
due to
 its poison in it.
In addition
, the odour of filled or trashed
plastic
 beside the roads makes
people
 annoyed all the time
as well as
 makes
people
's life uncomfortable.
Moreover
, it ruins the atmosphere for healthy living style. To look toward the solutions to it, First of all,
people
 should avoid
plastic
, we could replace
plastic
 with paper-based things or biodegradable things. To exemplify individuals can replace
plastic
 bags with paper bags, and
plastic
 bottles with reusable bottles. By doing
this
 humans could reduce some amount of
plastic
 from their environment.
Secondly
, it is
also
 the duty of the high authority to create a recycling system and keep the surroundings neat and clean by doing regular cleaning and using or hiring some specific machine or team of trained
people
.
To conclude
, all the aforementioned points illustrate that despite the action by every citizen and the same or more effort by the government could solve
this
 global problem.
This
 is a global problem, high authorities should need to take decisions before any other hazard to humans or other organisms on Earth.
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