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Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip

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Dear Mr.Wiliams, I am writing in connection with the notice posted on the
school
 forum looking for parents to go on a three-day
school
trip
 to another country. I would like to nominate myself. I would like to accompany my child James who is currently studying kindergarten at your
school
 and
also
 other children on the
school
trip
 to Paris. Previously, I worked as a teacher at Brooklyn High
School
 for 5 years and I have been on many
school
 trips with kids. I think my experience could be of use to you, which is why I want to volunteer for
this
trip
.
Furthermore
, I could take the role of a translator as I am very much proficient in French and
also
 I have been to Paris many times.
Moreover
, my homemaker skills like feeding children with patience and taking care of their belongings could
also
 be very helpful during the
trip
. I am very excited to be a part of
this
trip
 and I hope you give me the chance to volunteer. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Sahithi
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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