Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip

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Dear Mr.Wiliams, I am writing in connection with the notice posted on the

school

forum looking for parents to go on a three-day

school

trip

to another country. I would like to nominate myself. I would like to accompany my child James who is currently studying kindergarten at your

school

and

also

other children on the

school

trip

to Paris. Previously, I worked as a teacher at Brooklyn High

School

for 5 years and I have been on many

school

trips with kids. I think my experience could be of use to you, which is why I want to volunteer for

this

trip

Furthermore

, I could take the role of a translator as I am very much proficient in French and

also

I have been to Paris many times.

Moreover

, my homemaker skills like feeding children with patience and taking care of their belongings could

also

be very helpful during the

trip

. I am very excited to be a part of

this

trip

and I hope you give me the chance to volunteer. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Sahithi

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

184 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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