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The unpaid community service should be made a compulsory part in school curriculums. To what extent do you agree?

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Nowadays, it is believed that students should be required to do activities for voluntary community service. I totally agree with
this
 statement and the reasons will be taken into account in
this
 essay. First of all,
this
 helps students develop their personalities when they are in the most emotional and sensitive stage of their life.
This
 results from the fact that by doing voluntary work, youngsters can develop their empathy and humanity. Because of that, there will be a better generation and they will make the society become a better place for the weak and the poor.
Secondly
, the government can save a huge amount of money and do other useful
things
.
This
 originates from the truth that they do not pay for young people who are volunteers. So, the government can use
this
 money to construct or improve the infrastructure
such
 as building schools, hospitals, office buildings and roads.
Furthermore
, the poor can be supported financially to increase their life quality and make the gap between the poor and the rich more balance.
Finally
, the youth can be a model for adults and others to learn to do the same
things
.
This
 raises awareness among individuals and more people who need urgent help can be supported.
For instance
, television usually provides voluntary programs, so good
things
 can spread in our society and encourage people to do similar
things
. If
this
 happens in every part of the world, I believe we will have no war and live in peace. In conclusion, I am absolutely in agreement with the idea that voluntary community service should be a required section in school curriculums.
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