53.Developing countries require help offered by international organizations to ensure healthy and sustainable development. Some people think that financial aid is important. Others believe that practical aid and advice is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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recent decades have witnessed great advancements in the global economy, developing nations still need assistance from developed

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. Some people believe that providing financial support is the most effective solution to address

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problem.

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others maintain that practical

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, rather than financial assistance, is the better choice. Personally, I favour the latter perspective.

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, practical assistance can immediately

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developing nations in resolving crises. With the difference in development levels, the requirements for core factors

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as qualified teachers, doctors, and scientists cannot be met through purchasing alone.

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, a systematic approach to training and education is necessary.

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, non-financial

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from other

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is quite necessary.

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. During the outbreak of the Ebola virus in Africa,

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of providing financial

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, Chinese aircraft arrived carrying mobile laboratories for disease control and prevention.

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has made a significant contribution to combating the epidemic.

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, financial

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does not come without risks, and one of them is the potential for misuse. Obviously,

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the fact that parts of developing

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lack public surveillance, accountability or transparency in government operations, there is a high possibility that money might be appropriated for personal gain or even flow into the pockets of bureaucrats - corruption in short. Worse still, in less developed

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and almost any country during times of war, money is often misused by warlords to purchase new weapons and bombs

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of foodstuffs or medicines. Admittedly, financial

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allows a poor country to build an effective government by paying the salaries of government personnel without delay. Meanwhile, capital input brings vibrant industry, ever-increasing job opportunities, and tax revenue for public welfare.

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, as mentioned above, whether money can be used correctly or not depends on the specific conditions of the country. In conclusion, it seems to me that practical

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and advice are more useful for the development of developing

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mainly

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the expected outcome of practical

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as well as

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the potential risks associated with solely financial

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