The diagram below shows be changes of a village in 1995 and now.
The given diagram illustrates the alternation of a
village
from 1995 until now.
Looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that there are significant changes in the Linking Words
village
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such
as a new parking lot, apartments, and many facilities constructed in some areas, Linking Words
while
a hotel and housing stayed unchanged.
The most noteworthy alternates were farmland and forest park which were both replaced by a big golf court and tennis in the eastern north side of the Linking Words
village
. Use synonyms
Next,
the new parking lot was constructed just next to the hotel which remained unchanged. Linking Words
Likewise
, a cafe, which was located over the sea, was still in the same position as it began. Following that, both the fishing port, and fish market, which was restored by newly built apartments, were eliminated.
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Secondly
, the local shops, which were located in the western area of the Linking Words
village
, were substituted by the restaurants. Use synonyms
Lastly
, the residential area, which was in the northwest of the Linking Words
village
, was extended and added by 3 houses.Use synonyms
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